My heart was beating like a drum as i charged up the mountain. it was the hottest day ever! We reached a little stream with a log with stepping-stones. We crossed the stones with a splish! and a splash! Yay! we made it to the other side,"how long till we get there?"we all moaned "soon replied the adults.
All of a sudden i heard lots of buzzing"AHHH",calm down Katie", i said in my head "its probably just some wasps", Replied one of the teacher. Bang! Bang! someone was smacking a wasps nest into a tree! "AHH" we all screamed our heads off as the wasps stung us. It was a massive wasp attack!
We crossed a bridge with a sigh saying "20 minutes to the waterfall" "Yay we all said". We reached the waterfall. It was absolutely stunning. it was breathtaking, the most beautiful thing i have ever seen.
Nice story Katie. Next time I think you need to check your punctuation though and make sure I is written with a capital letter :-)
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